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【趣留学强烈推荐!】什么样的推荐信才能让人申请成功?

时间:2016-06-24  来源:  作者:

4 Amazing Recommendation Letter Samples for Students

原文作者: Rebecca Safier

亦鸥趣留学精心整理推荐

推荐信到底有多重要­

How important are recommendation letters in a college application­ According to William Fitzsimmons, dean of admissions and financial aid at Harvard, they are "extremely important".

推荐信究竟有多重要­根据哈佛招生办主任的说法:那是相当重要啊!我们的申请路上,唯一欠缺的可能就是一封靠谱的推荐信了!

本文,将为大家详细解读一篇优秀的推荐信必须具备的要素~

 

 

为什么推荐信很重要­

First, let's understand the role of recommendation letters in your application.

首先,理解推荐信在你的申请中所扮演的角色。

The majority of admissions officers at 4-year colleges are seeking to gain a sense of the student as a "whole person," rather than focusing on pieces of who he is based solely on grades and test scores. Since they rarely meet the student in person, the recommendation letters, along with the student's own personal essay, play a huge role in illuminating her intellectual and personal qualities.

所有学校在招生的时候,都希望对每一位学生有一个全面的认知和了解,而不是仅仅关注学生的GPA和G、T、S这些考试的成绩。由于没有办法和学生面对面地接触,他们就更依赖于推荐信和个人陈述等文书材料来了解学生的各项综合素质。

That's why recommendation letters from teachers, especially those who know their students well, carry a great deal of weight in applications. A letter that expresses a strong vote of support, as well as highlights a student's impressive academic and personal strengths, can have a powerful effect on that student's chances of admission.

这就是为什么来自于老师,特别是那些非常熟悉自己学生的老师的推荐信在所有申请材料中占据了非常重要的地位,很可能关乎你最后申请的成败!研究生申请中也会有学术推荐信(Academic RL),其实是同理——【RL】是帮助学校全面认识一位学生的重要依据!

你以为,成天刷分就能去梦校吗­Nope~

 

 

一封优秀的推荐信长啥样­

Let's look at some samples of strong recommendation letters, one from an English teacher, another from a physics teacher, the third from a history teacher, and the final one from a math teacher. Then we'll break down exactly why these letters of recommendation are effective.

接下来我们来看4封老师的推荐信。

由于篇幅限制,我们在此只展示其中一篇,并为大家进行详细的分析,另外三篇请在这里下载:

下载地址:http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gf6Vzqz (提取密码: jbrc)

强烈推荐大家认真读一下第 4篇,非常有参考价值哦!

Dear Admissions Committee, It is a great pleasure to recommend Stacy for admission to your engineering program. She is one of the most exceptional students I have encountered in my 15 years of teaching. I taught Stacy in my 11th grade honors physics class and advised her in Robotics Club. I am not surprised to find out she is now ranked at the top of an extraordinarily capable class of seniors. She has a keen interest in and talent for physics, math, and scientific inquiry. Her advanced skills and passion for the subject make her an ideal fit for your rigorous engineering program. Stacy is a perceptive, sharp, quick individual with a high aptitude for math and science. She is driven to understand how things work, whether they be the old computer hard drives in the school library or the forces that hold our universe together. Her final project in class was especially impressive, an investigation of frequency-dependent sound absorption, an idea that she said was sparked by not wanting to bother her parents with her hours of guitar practice at home. She's been a strong leader in Robotics Club, eager to share her knowledge with others and learn new skills. I have the students in the club prepare lessons and take turns leading our after-school meetings. When it was Stacy's turn, she showed up prepared with a fascinating lecture on lunar nautics and fun activities that got everyone moving and talking. She was our only student teacher to be met with much deserved applause at the end of her lesson. Stacy's personal strengths are as impressive as her intellectual accomplishments. She's an active, outgoing presence in class with a great sense of humor. Stacy's the perfect person to get a group project rolling, but she also knows how to sit back and let others take the lead. Her cheerful nature and openness to feedback means she's always learning and growing as a learner, an impressive strength that will continue to serve her well in college and beyond. Stacy is just the kind of driven, engaging, and curious student that helped make our classroom a lively environment and safe place to take intellectual risks. Stacy has my highest recommendation for admission to your engineering program. She has demonstrated excellence in all that she puts her mind to, whether it's designing an experiment, collaborating with others, or teaching herself to play classical and electrical guitar. Stacy's endless curiosity, combined with her willingness to take risks, leads me to believe there will be no limit to her growth and achievements in college and beyond. Please don't hesitate to contact me at milevafanclub@gmail.com if you have any questions. Sincerely, Ms. RandallPhysics TeacherMarie Curie High School

Tips你的推荐人必须欣赏你"Stacy is one of the most exceptional students she's had in 15 years of teaching". A statement like this is pretty extraordinary and will make an impact in the mind of its readers. Stacy sounds like a special student, and she chose her recommender well.“她是我15年教学生涯中遇到的最特别的一位学生”,听上去就会让人觉得印象深刻,而且也说明这位学生挑的推荐人很不错。

This letter uses strong, specific language, calling Stacy a perceptive and sharp person who has the confidence and good humor to take intellectual risks. Through its accurate and expressive language, this letter helps Stacy come to life in the mind of the reader. 透过精确、具体、表达性的语言,教授在推荐心中将Stacy这个人物塑造得相当鲜活生动。让学生仿佛从信中走到了招生官的面前。这让我不禁想到之前曾帮一些同学修改过的PS,好像流水账一样挨个报一下自己的分数和履历,缺乏特色和新意,表述上也没太多描述性的语言,多是平铺直叙,试想,这样的文书如何能打动一个从未见过你的招生官呢­

Beyond the evaluation, Ms. Randall gives specific examples of Stacy's academic and personal strengths. She talks about her successful teaching in Robotics Club, her leadership in group projects, and her dedicated practice to teaching herself to play the guitar. 除了给出评价,教授还给出了具体的例子来展示Stacy个人的学术实力和个人特色。

这其实也是所有英文写作的一个特色:具体、详实、例证充分!

Rather than spreading the letter too thin, Ms. Randall highlights a few core themes. She connects Stacy's love of music with her passion for physics by talking about the frequency-dependent sound absorption project. All the threads tie together in a nice, memorable bow. 同时,推荐信还必须要有一个明确的核心和主线,所有的相关细节都必须围绕同样给主线逐步展开。

这其实就和我们的托福写作是完全一样的道理:必须围绕同一个中心展开,理由必须能够支持观点,论证必须能够证明理由。

This letter is a strong vote of support for Stacy's application to an engineering program. Her physics teacher admires Stacy's skills and goals, and she made it clear that Stacy had her highest recommendation in this letter. 由于申请的是工科专业,学生找物理老师写推荐信也是顺利成章。

关于推荐信的总结1. 学术推荐信在所有申请材料中,对于招生官的参考价值相当高

2. 学术推荐信应该找非常了解自己、与自己所申请专业密切相关、对自己评价非常高的教授来撰写3. 学术推荐信中应该包括对于学生学术研究能力、个人特质等综合素质的详细介绍4. 推荐信应该紧紧围绕同一条主线,使用生动、具体的语言,并用一些详实的例子来支撑——跟托福写作的道理是一样一样一样的!如果你还不了解,欢迎回复“托福”,下载亦鸥托福app,进入“网友微课”收听Pt的最新讲解:托福28分的作文长这样!

 

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